Thursday, November 4, 2010

It was a windy day when the man crossed the road and went into the bus station. The mans name was John. John was a New York detective on an investigation. He was wearing all black investigating a girl named Carly following a man named Bill. They are at Giordano's Pizza. Bill is walking towards me so, I have to leave. I stand outside the window just looking at Carly. They got there pizza, ate it and then left. I followed them to Carly's hotel. Once Bill left, I went in. I couldn't find Carly anywhere. After looking for her for her for 2 minutes he realized she was already out the window. I then went out the window and saw her crossing the street but I was to slow. She was already gone. I went back to my house and lied down for a while. I opened my eyes to find 3 men including Bill standing over me. They said...
"Stand up"
I stud up and asked what this is all about.
"Where is Carly?"

NOT DONE!!!

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